okay i know this is random but i am creating a new manga and writing the scrip tell me what u think thanks










Okay now I have begun to create a video game so I guess ill create a manga while the video game is still in progress (and hopefully get it published) so I need a bunch of people who can draw on the computer and people who will actually work, about ten people will be fine and hopefully they can draw the same characters so the manga looks like an actual manga and not some weird picture book that’s full of distorted people who are support to actually be someone important so my video game is called honor so I guess the manga will be named Honor. Well hopefully this is good lol, well, with out further delay (and I have been talking too much this is Honor

Main characters Yoko Kamau (main character), Nina Tarahima (sorta like her sensei), Lord Hirakima (this was the leader of the wind tribe),

Honor Vol. 1
By Red Knight

The village of the wind tribe was no different from the earth, water and fire. It was always at war with some other village that had pissed them off or Vis versa. The wind tribe was currently at war with the water tribe and one of the tribes would not be there after they were done. This is were are story begins.

1 chapter one: Yoko’s Yin Self pg. 1

2 “Yoko!” (Nina Tarahima) pg. 2

3 (picture of her running with a fifty pack, running full speed) pg. 2

4 “I just came form the field” (in small text)/distance 5 mi. /time 3 min. 47 sec./ (around picture of Yoko Kamau) /huff/ times 3 pg. 2

5 grabs pack and takes it off back pg. 2

6 (Yoko lets go bag and it hits the ground sending sand up a little to show how heavy the bag is) “this is your supply of green herbs that Lord Hirakima wanted all 980 of them counted for” (Yoko Kamau) (small text around Yoko Kamau’s back) /relief at last/ pg. 3

7 “you know with so many casualties you’ll have to join the fight soon you now that?” (A picture of striking a dummy in the chest with a katana) (On other side of dummy /if it shows/ sand or straw comes out /depends on what the drawer feels like putting there/) (Besides the dummy) death pg. 3

8 (Picture of Yoko Kamau wielding a katana surrounded by enemies threatening to kill her) (Back ground dark to show that it’s her imagination) (Small letters beside Yoko Kamau) /I’m going to die/ pg. 3

9 “I don’t want to fight, I like to gather supplies” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko Kamau working hard in the fields gathering herbs, wheat, vegetables, ect. /with ever drawer wants to use/ pg. 4

10 “I keep thinking that I’ll die if I choose to fight” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko sluntched in disappointment)
pg. 4

11 “don’t you remember back at training you were so scared cause you thought you were going to war” (Nina Tarahima) (a picture a Nina Tarahima laughing at Yoko Kamau in front Yoko Kamau is slouching even more now) (small text around Yoko Kamau) /moan/ pg. 4

12 “you did have one of the highest scores in the training” ( ) (a picture of Nina Tarahima standing proud grinning) pg. 4

13 (a whole entire page just for my comment to the readers) / well this is my very first manga and so far I am really stressing out over it, not only because its hard to find good drawers that want to draw for me (I am mister popular in my high school) then there comes the challenge of actually creating unique names like Yoko Kamau. Kamau means small warrior, as of Nina Tarahima, Nina is a name I love besides Yoko and Tarahima came from one of friend’s drawings. I really hope you like this manga cause it is my first and I am trying my best to keep it entertaining so you wont want to put down this manga and go read another manga. oh yeah guess what, this book is to become a video game so I hope that both the manga and the video game are a hit in entertainment market. also I deal with the issue of making sure I am not doing anything in the story to wear I can get sued for it believe me I am trying hard… it was risky enough with the wind, earth, water and fire tribes./ (picture of me and all off crew in the court room wearing prisoner cloths and cuffed up) pg. 5


14 (in small text top left corner) /2 months ago/ (a picture of Yoko Kamau wielding a reversed katana 5 feet length running toward a series of targets) pg. 6

15 (a picture of Yoko Kamau jumping ten feet in the air toward the targets, blood lust starting to rage through her) pg. 6

16 (a picture of Yoko Kamau coming down and her katana hits one of the targets) pg. 6

17 (explosion) pg. 7

18 (shows targets all destroy and Yoko Kamau puts away sword with a grin) pg. 7

19 (a picture of ten other wind tribe members looking surprised) pg. 7

20 “yeah I know but that was yan, I am not like that yin is the life I want to live” (Yoko Kamau) (picture of Yoko Kamau with wind blowing through her hair and flowers caught in the wind, her cheeks are slightly blushed and her eyes are sparkly) (in small text around Yoko Kamau) /too perfect/ pg. 8

20 “ this war has been going on for five months and already we have had over 120 casualties while the water tribe has keep there numbers under 100.” (Yoko Kamau) pg. 9

22 “sigh” (Nina Tarahima) (Nina gets an ideal) pg. 9

23 (Nina Tarahima draws both of her katanas) pg. 9

24 (Nina Tarahima jumps in the air) (in small text were Nina was) /soar!/ pg. 9

25 (shows Nina Tarahima’s feet land in front of Yoko Kamau) pg. 9

26 “AHHHHH!!!” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko Kamau shivering) (in small text around Yoko Kamau’s body) / shocked/ (in small text around Nina Tarahima’s body) /surprise/ pg. 10

27 “so I am so sick and tired of your little “I don’t want to fight crap” so if u want to live your going to have to at least hit me once” (Nina Tarahima) (a picture of Nina Tarahima has a serious look on her face) pg. 10

28 “w… what do u mean” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko Kamau with both hands on her chest, and a scared look on her face, tears forming at the tip of her eyes) pg. 10

29 “do u really want to kill me? am I that much of a pest to u Sensei ” “so u WANT ME TO FIGHT?” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko Kamau tears streaming down her hands do in side her outfit) pg. 10

30 (picture of Yoko Kamau drawing her katana, tears are gone, angry look appears) pg. 11

31 “so u want me to fight, well I’ll give u something to be angry about” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko wielding katana, hand grip tighten, mouth is open wide enough to tell she is yelling pg. 11

32 “I didn’t think u would ever threaten my life, I guess I overestimated you” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko Kamau she looks evil now totally different from her normal self, she’s grinning, her grip on her katana is lease tense) pg. 11

33 (a picture of the edge of Yoko’s katana real small) pg. 11

34 (a picture of the edge of Yoko Kamau’s katana turned 45 degrees counter clock wise really small) pg. 11

35 (a picture of the edge of Yoko Kamau’s katana turned another 45 degrees counter clock wise real small) pg. 11

36 ‘lets begin then sensei since you obviously wanted to fight” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko Kamau wielding her katana with both hands drawn back and she starts to charge) pg. 12

37 “I wonder how Tarahima Nina is doing on her little test with Kamau Yoko” (Lord Hirakima) (a picture of Lord Hirakima standing against a wall smirking his two assistances are staring each other, puzzled for they do not know of what is happening) (in small text around two assistances) /huh?/ pg. 12

38 “you seem surprised) (I told Tarahima Nina to test Kamau Yoko to see if she could defend herself in case of an attack from the enemy) (Lord Hirakima) (a picture of Lord Hirakima smirking to himself) pg. 12

39 “I just pray that Nina Sensei doesn’t underestimate Yoko…) (I see great potential in her, she just might be the key to our victory) (Lord Hirakima) (a picture of Lord Hirakima with his eyes wide open and his face really serious) pg. 12

40 (in small text surrounded by black) meanwhile… pg. 12

41 (picture of Yoko Kamau leaping in the air) pg. 13

42 (also Nina Tarahima leaps in the air to meat Yoko Kamau) pg. 13

43 (small picture) (Nina Tarahima’s two katanas colliding with Yoko Kamau’s katana) pg. 13

44 (small picture) (Nina Tarahima’s two katanas colliding with Yoko Kamau’s katana) pg. 13

45 (small picture) (Nina Tarahima’s two katanas colliding with Yoko Kamau’s katana) pg. 13

46 (small picture) (Nina Tarahima’s two katanas colliding with Yoko Kamau’s katana) pg. 13

47 (small picture) (Nina Tarahima’s two katanas colliding with Yoko Kamau’s katana) pg. 13

48 (small picture) (Nina Tarahima’s two katanas colliding with Yoko Kamau’s katana) pg. 13

49 (a picture that covers the entire page it shows Nina driving Yoko to the ground) pg. 14

50 (explosion!) pg. 15

51 (picture of Nina skipping backwards with bouncing lines in front of her to show that she hoping backwards) pg. 16

52 (a picture of Yoko Kamau getting up from the ground, she is all bruised up and scratched up from the blow, her eyes are still very sturdy and she’s grinning) pg. 16

53 “your too fast, I try to keep up” “guess I’ll have to use my inner-self, ohh well…) (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko Kamau pointing her katana at Nina Tarahima still smirking) pg. 16

54 (a picture of Nina Tarahima leaping toward Yoko Kamau both of her katanas are pointed backwards to boost speed)
pg. 16

55 “here I COME!!!” (Nina Tarahima) “I never thought for someone who hates fighting can sure put up a good one” (a picture of Nina Tarahima charging at Yoko Kamau lines beside and behind her to show she charging) pg. 16

56 (a picture of Yoko smirking and brings up her katana) pg. 16

57 “come on!” (Yoko Kamau) (a picture of Yoko gripping her katana in a way so that it shows she is going to attack) (there are lines in front of her to show that Nina Tarahima is coming) pg. 17

58 “hmmm…” “Kamau Yoko is doing much better than what I thought” (Lord Hirakima) (small text around Lord Hirakima) /watching from above/ pg. 17

59 “she id do fierce yet so calm and collective when I see her in the field gathering herbs” ()